Thursday, December 1, 2011

Argument: Abortion Should Be Legal

Assertion/Claim (Topic Sentence) = Main Idea
  • Abortion should be legal.
Evidence- Concrete Detail:
  • Abortion should stay legalized because in some situations it could be harmful to the mother, or she could have been rapped.
  • Commentary 1: If the woman was rapped or she accidentally got pregnant and abortion was illegal, the woman may not be financially ready for a child and won't be able to care for the child anyway.
  • Commentary 2: If the woman was rapped I do not think there is one woman on this earth that wants to take care of the child that's father rapped her. The child would just make the mother have constant memories on the day/night the incident happened, no one wants that
  •  If the government does not keep abortion legalized woman may proceed to do self-induced abortions, which is very harmful to the woman.
  • Commentary 1: If abortion is illegal women that were rapped or truly despise children, and does not want to have a child may try self-induced abortion which includes punching the abdomen or being kicked in the abdomen. People also use hangers and sharp objects, which could cause a bad infection, and if the infection is bad enough it could kill the woman too.
  • Commentary 2: If the women does not do it correctly she could still have the child but it could have defects from trying to do that damage, and those defects wont be minor in any circumstance.                           

Opposing Claims/They Say:
  • The people that oppose abortion say it is wrong because part of the government says God says no, and its like murdering.

My Rebuttal/I say:
  • Just because part of the government says it's wrong because of their beliefs in God should not be the only reason it should be illegal. Because the government is just a bunch of crap. They want us to agree abortion should be illegal because God says its wrong, yet they wont let us pray in schools or let teachers about God, but when abortion comes into the picture heaven forbid we go against. I say it should be the woman's decsion, her body, her choice. The government should stay out of it!



My Paragraph
Abortion should be legal. Abortion should stay legalized because in some situations it could be harmful to the mother, or she could have been rapped. If the woman was rapped or she accidentally got pregnant and abortion was illegal, the woman may not be financially ready for a child and won't be able to care for the child anyway. Also what if the woman was rapped I do not think there is one woman on this earth that wants to take care of the child that is father rapped her. The child would just make the mother have constant memories on the day/night the incident happened, no one wants that. Another reason to support keeping abortion legalized is if the government does not keep abortion legalized woman may proceed to do self-induced abortions, which is very harmful to the woman.   If abortion is illegal women that were rapped or truly despise children, and does not want to have a child may try self-induced abortion which includes punching the abdomen or being kicked in the abdomen. People also use hangers and sharp objects, which could cause a bad infection, and if the infection is bad enough it could kill the woman too. If the women does not do the self-induced procedure correctly she could still have the child but it could have defects from trying to do that damage, and those defects wont be minor in any circumstance. Just because part of the government says it's wrong because of their beliefs in God should not be the only reason it should be illegal. Because the government is just a bunch of crap. They want us to agree abortion should be illegal because God says its wrong, yet they wont let us pray in schools or let teachers about God, but when abortion comes into the picture heaven forbid we go against. I say it should be the woman's decsion, her body, her choice. The government should stay out of it! Now you and everyone can see I'm obviously right about this situation.


My Thinking:
This paragraph is based mainly on inductive thinking because it only shows my side of the argument.

Source:
-Why Abortion Should Be Legal

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